Owens Lake: Revision history

8 February 2011

• curprev 14:5914:59, 8 February 2011‎ imported>Milton Beychok‎ m 13,837 bytes +272‎ Added another reference
• curprev 14:3714:37, 8 February 2011‎ imported>Milton Beychok‎ 13,565 bytes +3,185‎ Added test, photos and references updating to current conditions. Also reworked the past editions . See Talk page for rationale.

4 February 2011

• curprev 16:0916:09, 4 February 2011‎ imported>Ro Thorpe‎ m 10,381 bytes +1‎ →‎History
• curprev 16:0616:06, 4 February 2011‎ imported>Ro Thorpe‎ m 10,380 bytes +8‎ →‎History: presumably; thanks for 'lines' explanation
• curprev 13:1113:11, 4 February 2011‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 10,372 bytes −49‎ rewrote another sentence
• curprev 13:0913:09, 4 February 2011‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 10,373 bytes −4‎ forgot to delete another word
• curprev 13:0813:08, 4 February 2011‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 10,377 bytes −44‎ I don't see why we need the words "state lines" in the first place
• curprev 13:0713:07, 4 February 2011‎ imported>Milton Beychok‎ 10,421 bytes −121‎ Ro, "state line" simply means "boundary line" and it is a singular noun rather than plural. Lake Tahoe's east shore is in Nevada, west shore in California.
• curprev 12:3812:38, 4 February 2011‎ imported>Ro Thorpe‎ m 10,393 bytes +118‎ I'm a foreigner, & I don't understand this location
• curprev 11:4811:48, 4 February 2011‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 10,389 bytes +114‎ Put, in the lede, where it should be in any newspaper article, the *reason* Owens Lake is worthy of inclusion here.
• curprev 11:4311:43, 4 February 2011‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 10,275 bytes −267‎ removed some text from lede -- this article is about Owens Lake, not Tahoe
• curprev 11:1511:15, 4 February 2011‎ imported>Mary Ash‎ 10,542 bytes +1,330‎ No edit summary
• curprev 11:1411:14, 4 February 2011‎ imported>Mary Ash‎ 10,537 bytes −8,518‎ Rewrote akward sentence and gave a location from Reno, NV
• curprev 01:1401:14, 4 February 2011‎ imported>Milton Beychok‎ m 10,245 bytes 0‎ Reduced the image size a teensy bit so that "(particulate matter)" isn't on the lede's last line all by itself. Just a style thing.

3 February 2011

• curprev 23:2323:23, 3 February 2011‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 10,245 bytes +35‎ rewriting the lede again, forgot to save it the first time
• curprev 18:5818:58, 3 February 2011‎ imported>Milton Beychok‎ 10,210 bytes −8,845‎ Removed the EPA Questions and Answers section. See the Talk page for rationale.
• curprev 14:3814:38, 3 February 2011‎ imported>Mary Ash‎ 19,055 bytes +9,843‎ →‎Air pollution
• curprev 13:0413:04, 3 February 2011‎ imported>Mary Ash‎ 21,991 bytes +11,781‎ →‎Air pollution

2 February 2011

• curprev 23:3023:30, 2 February 2011‎ imported>Milton Beychok‎ m 10,210 bytes −29‎ Shortened the coding of yet another reference.
• curprev 23:1123:11, 2 February 2011‎ imported>Milton Beychok‎ m 10,239 bytes +331‎ Changed occurrences of PM 10 or PM-10 to PM₁₀ which is the usual symbol.
• curprev 23:0123:01, 2 February 2011‎ imported>Mary Ash‎ 10,178 bytes +270‎ Adding 2010 nonattainment info
• curprev 22:5722:57, 2 February 2011‎ imported>Milton Beychok‎ m 9,788 bytes −117‎ Shortened coding of 2 more references. Also tightened up the edit page to delete space between sentences.
• curprev 17:3017:30, 2 February 2011‎ imported>Ro Thorpe‎ m 9,905 bytes −3‎ seems to be 1 word
• curprev 14:5814:58, 2 February 2011‎ imported>Milton Beychok‎ m 9,908 bytes 0‎ Shortened coding for another reference
• curprev 13:2713:27, 2 February 2011‎ imported>Mary Ash‎ 9,908 bytes +729‎ →‎Air pollution: Adding updated info
• curprev 02:2302:23, 2 February 2011‎ imported>Milton Beychok‎ 9,179 bytes −267‎ Revised about another half of the references to use much shorter coding so that the Edit page is more easily read. Finished with this now.
• curprev 01:1601:16, 2 February 2011‎ imported>Milton Beychok‎ m 9,446 bytes −35‎ Revised about half of the references to use much shorter coding so that the Edit page is more easily read.

1 February 2011

• curprev 15:0315:03, 1 February 2011‎ imported>Milton Beychok‎ m 9,577 bytes +96‎ →‎Air pollution: Fixed 2 wiki links
• curprev 15:0115:01, 1 February 2011‎ imported>Ro Thorpe‎ m 9,577 bytes −2‎ →‎Air pollution
• curprev 14:5414:54, 1 February 2011‎ imported>Milton Beychok‎ 9,579 bytes +88‎ Minor modification to clarify the PM-10 emissions numbres
• curprev 12:1612:16, 1 February 2011‎ imported>Mary Ash‎ 9,491 bytes +11‎ →‎Air pollution
• curprev 11:1511:15, 1 February 2011‎ imported>Mary Ash‎ 9,480 bytes −1‎ →‎Air pollution: correcting typo
• curprev 10:1810:18, 1 February 2011‎ imported>Ro Thorpe‎ m 9,481 bytes +269‎ No edit summary
• curprev 08:5708:57, 1 February 2011‎ imported>Peter Schmitt‎ m 9,481 bytes +269‎ missing bracket
• curprev 08:5608:56, 1 February 2011‎ imported>Peter Schmitt‎ 9,479 bytes +32‎ →‎Los Angeles: title
• curprev 08:5608:56, 1 February 2011‎ imported>Peter Schmitt‎ 9,469 bytes +22‎ →‎Los Angeles: section heading
• curprev 08:5508:55, 1 February 2011‎ imported>Peter Schmitt‎ 9,447 bytes +235‎ added cause and pollution
• curprev 08:3808:38, 1 February 2011‎ imported>Peter Schmitt‎ 9,212 bytes +9,212‎ moving details on pollution to a section -- not suitable for intro
• curprev 07:5907:59, 1 February 2011‎ imported>Mary Ash‎ 9,211 bytes +321‎ No edit summary
• curprev 02:1602:16, 1 February 2011‎ imported>Mary Ash‎ 9,212 bytes +14‎ No edit summary
• curprev 02:0702:07, 1 February 2011‎ imported>Mary Ash‎ 9,198 bytes 0‎ No edit summary
• curprev 01:2401:24, 1 February 2011‎ imported>Mary Ash‎ 9,198 bytes +308‎ →‎Los Angeles
• curprev 01:1801:18, 1 February 2011‎ imported>Mary Ash‎ 9,007 bytes +117‎ →‎Los Angeles
• curprev 01:1701:17, 1 February 2011‎ imported>Mary Ash‎ 9,007 bytes +117‎ adding photo
• curprev 00:4600:46, 1 February 2011‎ imported>Mary Ash‎ 8,890 bytes +8,890‎ No edit summary
• curprev 00:4200:42, 1 February 2011‎ imported>Mary Ash‎ 8,935 bytes +298‎ No edit summary
• curprev 00:4100:41, 1 February 2011‎ imported>Mary Ash‎ 8,637 bytes +278‎ No edit summary
• curprev 00:3600:36, 1 February 2011‎ imported>Mary Ash‎ 8,359 bytes +8,359‎ No edit summary
• curprev 00:3400:34, 1 February 2011‎ imported>Mary Ash‎ 8,330 bytes +8,330‎ This should be a good start. I'll recheck the facts and writing tomorrow as it's late here.
• curprev 00:1300:13, 1 February 2011‎ imported>Mary Ash‎ 12 bytes +12‎ New article generated using Special:MetadataForm