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This article concentrates too much on Scotland from the perspective of a person living in Scotland or at least the UK. To a large extent, it defines Scotland as, "Not England." Too much time is spent defining the relationship between Scotland and England. It needs a change in perspective to make it more informative to a reader from outside the UK and to give Scotland's position with reference to the world, not just the UK.
This article concentrates too much on Scotland from the perspective of a person living in Scotland or at least the UK. To a large extent, it defines Scotland as, "Not England." Too much time is spent defining the relationship between Scotland and England. It needs a change in perspective to make it more informative to a reader from outside the UK and to give Scotland's position with reference to the world, not just the UK. [[User:Derek Harkness|Derek Harkness]] 11:29, 25 November 2006 (CST)

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This article concentrates too much on Scotland from the perspective of a person living in Scotland or at least the UK. To a large extent, it defines Scotland as, "Not England." Too much time is spent defining the relationship between Scotland and England. It needs a change in perspective to make it more informative to a reader from outside the UK and to give Scotland's position with reference to the world, not just the UK. Derek Harkness 11:29, 25 November 2006 (CST)