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==A possible suggestion==
I know nothing about this topic, but don't you think that for all the idiots like me the first paragraph should be somewhat rewritten?  A quick suggestion is:
A '''coherer''' is a type of radio detector, popular in the earliest days of radio development, beginning around 1890. Coherers, in conjunction with spark-gap transmitters, were the first devices to make radio communication practical. Its defining characteristic is a "light-contact" segment, that is normally a poor electrical conductor, but which undergoes a sudden change in conductivity — usually a marked increase — in response to the increased voltage induced by a received radio signal.
This way, at least by the end of the second sentence, we have an idea of why this is an important concept.... [[User:Hayford Peirce|Hayford Peirce]] 13:52, 12 June 2007 (CDT)

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Article Checklist for "Coherer"
Workgroup category or categories Media Workgroup, Engineering Workgroup [Categories OK]
Article status Developed article: complete or nearly so
Underlinked article? Yes
Basic cleanup done? Yes
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A possible suggestion

I know nothing about this topic, but don't you think that for all the idiots like me the first paragraph should be somewhat rewritten? A quick suggestion is:

A coherer is a type of radio detector, popular in the earliest days of radio development, beginning around 1890. Coherers, in conjunction with spark-gap transmitters, were the first devices to make radio communication practical. Its defining characteristic is a "light-contact" segment, that is normally a poor electrical conductor, but which undergoes a sudden change in conductivity — usually a marked increase — in response to the increased voltage induced by a received radio signal.

This way, at least by the end of the second sentence, we have an idea of why this is an important concept.... Hayford Peirce 13:52, 12 June 2007 (CDT)