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My first draft here is based on [http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Matthew_Diaz&diff=72801949&oldid=72801523 my first draft on the wikipedia.]  Cheers!  [[User:George Swan|George Swan]] 16:13, 20 October 2007 (CDT)
My first draft here is based on [http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Matthew_Diaz&diff=72801949&oldid=72801523 my first draft on the wikipedia.]  Cheers!  [[User:George Swan|George Swan]] 16:13, 20 October 2007 (CDT)
Could we have a little more information in the lead paragraph explaining why Matthew Diaz is important, please?  I was able to figure out what the article was about only because I've been following your other contributions.  Even now, having read the article and done a quick internet search for this man's name, I'm confused about who he is and what he did. --[[User:Joe Quick|Joe Quick]] 17:01, 20 October 2007 (CDT)

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My first draft here is based on my first draft on the wikipedia. Cheers! George Swan 16:13, 20 October 2007 (CDT)


Could we have a little more information in the lead paragraph explaining why Matthew Diaz is important, please? I was able to figure out what the article was about only because I've been following your other contributions. Even now, having read the article and done a quick internet search for this man's name, I'm confused about who he is and what he did. --Joe Quick 17:01, 20 October 2007 (CDT)