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==Nice Rewrite==
Very nice. Much clearer and easier to read. Couple of comments:


== Moving towards approval==
:It was clear from the statistics at the time that changes in the money supply do not have an instantaneous effect upon prices.
Now that we have an (almost) approved microeconomics article, it seems like a good time to focus on this one. My overall impression is that the article is too long as an introduction. Also, I think it focuses too much on models right up front. Modeling is an important tool and what most macroeconomists spend their time doing, but not the point of macro.  
::''At what time?''
:...the control of inflation was widely adopted by governments and central banks in the early 1980s with results that are described below.
::''Where? Please link.''
:techniques  for testing relationships incorporating time-lags  were applied to United States statistics <ref> Friedman and Meiselman The relative stability of monetary velocity and the Investment Multiplier in the United States 1897-1958 in ''Stabilisation Policies, CMC Research Papers'' p165  Prentice-Hall 1964</ref>, and they  indicated that price increases had followed money supply increases with lags that were long and variable.  Critics argued that this was not conclusive proof,  and  further statistical tests <ref>
[http://cepa.newschool.edu/het/essays/monetarism/monetarcont.htm The development of monetarism (CEPA)]</ref>  were attempted to test the Keynesian theory that the ''[[transmission mechanism]]'' was such that increases in the money supply would not affect the prices of goods because they would be spent on financial assets.
::''I think this might be a little too detailed of a description for an introduction. I would suggest something simpler along the lines of "... an empirical question whether newly created dollars are spent on goods and services or on interest bearing securities as claimed by Keynesians..."''


The big problem is that macroeconomics is a mess as a discipline which makes it difficult to write a coherent introductory article. I think a useful approach might be to focus on the "themes" or story of macroeconomics up front. Why is macroeconomics important rather than a list of things that macroeconomists have done or are doing. I would suggest:
On Money supply: Evidence that emerged some years after the initial formulation of monetarism established its validity, together with some serious limitations upon its usefulness.
*Economic growth is the most important factor influencing the advancement and improvement of human welfare and quality of life.
:: ''I think this paragraph might need some rewording.'' [[User:Stephen Saletta|Stephen Saletta]] 20:00, 15 November 2007 (CST)
*International trade is important for growth
*Government policy has a significant impact on both growth and trade.
*At this point, hopefully the reader has an idea of why models might be important, then we can launch into the notion of developing a model to figure out what effect changing variable (a) has on variables (b)...(z)


I think most of the information is on the page is good and usable in either this article or a subtopic, the real challenge is manipulating it into something with a nice flow that is easier to understand. [[User:Stephen Saletta|Stephen Saletta]] 07:30, 13 November 2007 (CST)


== The treatment of monetarism ==
Thank you for your reassuring comment, Stephen. I had been wondering whether the reversion to a textbook-style explanation would be more acceptable.  I have tried to meet your criticisms by deleting unnecessary verbiage - bearing in mind, also, that the subject seemed to be getting too much space.
[[User:Nick Gardner|Nick Gardner]] 03:29, 16 November 2007 (CST)
:Nick, I hope I haven't been too critical... you've clearly been doing the yeoman's work around here. This article is already much more lucid than the one at WP. If my if my comments aren't constructive or you think I'm dumbing things down too much, I will be happy to shut my pie hole and go back to work on [[public good]]s (and would appreciate your feedback over there on my treatment of externalities). On the other hand, if there's a way feedback could be more helpful to you, it would be great to hear about it. I know everyone appreciates your work and is anxious to see this article approved. [[User:Stephen Saletta|Stephen Saletta]] 21:24, 16 November 2007 (CST)


In this draft I have dismissed the simplistic version of monetarism without coming to a conclusion about the validity of the more sophisticated version employed by monetary economists.
Your comments and criticisms have been very welcome, Stephen. I am confident that they have prompted improvements to the articles. It is not easy to stand back and take a detached view of one's own work, so a bystander's view is almost bound to be helpful. Please keep it up.  
This avoids unnecessary controversy. To my mind the matter is, in any case, not worth pursuing. Monetarism was abandoned because monetary control was found impracticable, not because its theoretical grounding was found wanting. I plan to bring that out in the section on the management of the economy.
[[User:Nick Gardner|Nick Gardner]] 23:55, 16 November 2007 (CST)


[[User:Nick Gardner|Nick Gardner]] 10:45, 24 September 2007 (CDT)
==Towards approval==
 
In an effort to move this article along, I've moved some of the older/completed discussion to [[/Archive 1|Archive 1]]. Perhaps a fresh look at the main article and comments would be in order. [[User:Stephen Saletta|Stephen Saletta]] 22:22, 17 April 2008 (CDT)
You make a reasonable point about the empirical experiences of monetarist policy. I wonder whether we should mention in passing some of the more sophisticated approaches -- just for encyclopaedic completeness.--[[User:Martin Baldwin-Edwards|Martin Baldwin-Edwards]] 10:52, 24 September 2007 (CDT)
 
Point taken. But I don't want to overburden readers at the outset. I will try to cover it in the section on qualifictions and extensions.
[[User:Nick Gardner|Nick Gardner]] 15:07, 25 September 2007 (CDT)
:The current treatment of monetarism seems a little editorialized at the moment. I would state what it is (money supply is the only thing that matters). I think it would also be reasonable to state that it has been surpassed by the neoclassical synthesis and if you want to mention some neokeynesian critique, that would be reasonable as well.[[User:Stephen Saletta|Stephen Saletta]] 07:00, 13 November 2007 (CST)
 
== What's left to do? ==
 
It is time to consider what has been left out. Under economic policy I plan to cover the supply side and globalisation constraints on domestic policy. What else should be included? And should there be a concluding section dealing with speculative issues?
Suggestions please!
 
[[User:Nick Gardner|Nick Gardner]] 07:24, 28 September 2007 (CDT)
 
== Fin ==
 
That's that - for the time being, at least. I may come back with some changes in a few months' time.
 
I will try to get round to draft the articles that I have "invented" by creating links, but I hope somone else will help out regarding the dissenting views.
 
I am sorry that my plea for comments seems so far to have fallen on deaf ears, but I live in hope!
 
[[User:Nick Gardner|Nick Gardner]] 11:28, 12 October 2007 (CDT)

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Nice Rewrite

Very nice. Much clearer and easier to read. Couple of comments:

It was clear from the statistics at the time that changes in the money supply do not have an instantaneous effect upon prices.
At what time?
...the control of inflation was widely adopted by governments and central banks in the early 1980s with results that are described below.
Where? Please link.
techniques for testing relationships incorporating time-lags were applied to United States statistics [1], and they indicated that price increases had followed money supply increases with lags that were long and variable. Critics argued that this was not conclusive proof, and further statistical tests [2] were attempted to test the Keynesian theory that the transmission mechanism was such that increases in the money supply would not affect the prices of goods because they would be spent on financial assets.
I think this might be a little too detailed of a description for an introduction. I would suggest something simpler along the lines of "... an empirical question whether newly created dollars are spent on goods and services or on interest bearing securities as claimed by Keynesians..."

On Money supply: Evidence that emerged some years after the initial formulation of monetarism established its validity, together with some serious limitations upon its usefulness.

I think this paragraph might need some rewording. Stephen Saletta 20:00, 15 November 2007 (CST)


Thank you for your reassuring comment, Stephen. I had been wondering whether the reversion to a textbook-style explanation would be more acceptable. I have tried to meet your criticisms by deleting unnecessary verbiage - bearing in mind, also, that the subject seemed to be getting too much space. Nick Gardner 03:29, 16 November 2007 (CST)

Nick, I hope I haven't been too critical... you've clearly been doing the yeoman's work around here. This article is already much more lucid than the one at WP. If my if my comments aren't constructive or you think I'm dumbing things down too much, I will be happy to shut my pie hole and go back to work on public goods (and would appreciate your feedback over there on my treatment of externalities). On the other hand, if there's a way feedback could be more helpful to you, it would be great to hear about it. I know everyone appreciates your work and is anxious to see this article approved. Stephen Saletta 21:24, 16 November 2007 (CST)

Your comments and criticisms have been very welcome, Stephen. I am confident that they have prompted improvements to the articles. It is not easy to stand back and take a detached view of one's own work, so a bystander's view is almost bound to be helpful. Please keep it up. Nick Gardner 23:55, 16 November 2007 (CST)

Towards approval

In an effort to move this article along, I've moved some of the older/completed discussion to Archive 1. Perhaps a fresh look at the main article and comments would be in order. Stephen Saletta 22:22, 17 April 2008 (CDT)

  1. Friedman and Meiselman The relative stability of monetary velocity and the Investment Multiplier in the United States 1897-1958 in Stabilisation Policies, CMC Research Papers p165 Prentice-Hall 1964
  2. The development of monetarism (CEPA)