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[[User:Howard C. Berkowitz|Howard C. Berkowitz]] 17:43, 23 October 2008 (UTC) | [[User:Howard C. Berkowitz|Howard C. Berkowitz]] 17:43, 23 October 2008 (UTC) | ||
:Howard, I am thoroughly confused! Are you talking about approving this article? If so, I don't see where you made any of the changes you mentioned above. | <s>:Howard, I am thoroughly confused! Are you talking about approving this article? If so, I don't see where you made any of the changes you mentioned above. | ||
:Or are you talking about my approving the [[Incident Command System]] article? | :Or are you talking about my approving the [[Incident Command System]] article? | ||
:Please clarify. Regards, [[User:Milton Beychok|Milton Beychok]] 18:01, 23 October 2008 (UTC) | :Please clarify. Regards, [[User:Milton Beychok|Milton Beychok]] 18:01, 23 October 2008 (UTC)</s> |
Revision as of 12:10, 23 October 2008
Wikipedia has an article with the same title
I was the original creator and major contributor to the Wikipedia article. I have reworded parts of it and made a few other changes to make it suitable for Citizendium. Milton Beychok 19:03, 22 February 2008 (CST)
Looks ready for approval
I added a few related terms and started/updated some emergency management and decontamination. You may well know more about decontaminating fuel spills than I do; that's on the list.
Did you want to include any meteorological information?
I'd like to align the table of contents a bit, and there are a couple of sub-references whose formatting I'd like to examine. Personally, I like the 2-column reflist, but that's certainly your call.
Otherwise, are you happy with having it approved? I will be looking at some thing below it as well. You have no idea how pleasant it is to be reading this as a relief from homeopathy
Howard C. Berkowitz 17:43, 23 October 2008 (UTC)
:Howard, I am thoroughly confused! Are you talking about approving this article? If so, I don't see where you made any of the changes you mentioned above.
- Or are you talking about my approving the Incident Command System article?
Please clarify. Regards, Milton Beychok 18:01, 23 October 2008 (UTC)