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The stages of labor are principally pertinent to vaginal delivery. Episiotomy is pertinent to the second stage. In your draft, everything is at the same hierarchical level. [[User:Howard C. Berkowitz|Howard C. Berkowitz]] 00:43, 4 August 2010 (UTC) | The stages of labor are principally pertinent to vaginal delivery. Episiotomy is pertinent to the second stage. In your draft, everything is at the same hierarchical level. [[User:Howard C. Berkowitz|Howard C. Berkowitz]] 00:43, 4 August 2010 (UTC) | ||
:I did not remove the text that came with starting the article. I left that to the editor. I did not list when an episiotomy is done but left that as a separate section in case anyone wanted to expand it. I also removed the opinion, not based on fact, concerning the episotomy. The US government public domain article I used to reference the article did not include that information. | |||
[[User:Mary Ash|Mary Ash]] 00:51, 4 August 2010 (UTC) | |||
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First, Mary, you've been including a good deal of metadata, which only goes in the metadata subpage, in several main articles. The only metadata that goes into the main page is {{subpages}}.
I removed whitespace. In general, extra line breaks are needed only if one is trying to format the position of a graphic or table.
The stages of labor are principally pertinent to vaginal delivery. Episiotomy is pertinent to the second stage. In your draft, everything is at the same hierarchical level. Howard C. Berkowitz 00:43, 4 August 2010 (UTC)
- I did not remove the text that came with starting the article. I left that to the editor. I did not list when an episiotomy is done but left that as a separate section in case anyone wanted to expand it. I also removed the opinion, not based on fact, concerning the episotomy. The US government public domain article I used to reference the article did not include that information.
Mary Ash 00:51, 4 August 2010 (UTC)