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This article has had extensive improvement changes resulting from a long and fruitful dialogue between principal author, [[User:Richard Nevell|Richard Nevell]], and a knowledgeable historical and archaeological reviewer, [[User:Russell D. Jones|Russell D. Jones]]. [[User:Anthony.Sebastian|Anthony.Sebastian]] 03:41, 1 February 2013 (UTC)
This article has had extensive improvement changes resulting from a long and fruitful dialogue between principal author, [[User:Richard Nevell|Richard Nevell]], and a knowledgeable historical and archaeological reviewer, [[User:Russell D. Jones|Russell D. Jones]]. [[User:Anthony.Sebastian|Anthony.Sebastian]] 03:41, 1 February 2013 (UTC)
:The narrative flows smoothly, coherently. Some copy-editing needed. Question for Richard Nevell left on Talk page. [[User:Anthony.Sebastian|Anthony.Sebastian]] 04:50, 1 February 2013 (UTC)

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Approval Manager

This article has had extensive improvement changes resulting from a long and fruitful dialogue between principal author, Richard Nevell, and a knowledgeable historical and archaeological reviewer, Russell D. Jones. Anthony.Sebastian 03:41, 1 February 2013 (UTC)

The narrative flows smoothly, coherently. Some copy-editing needed. Question for Richard Nevell left on Talk page. Anthony.Sebastian 04:50, 1 February 2013 (UTC)