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Great content so far, but I'm wondering if the intro is a bit too chummy. Would anyone object to making it a bit more academic? Blessings. --[[User:Michael J. Formica|Michael J. Formica]] 10:44, 5 November 2007 (CST) | Great content so far, but I'm wondering if the intro is a bit too chummy. Would anyone object to making it a bit more academic? Blessings. --[[User:Michael J. Formica|Michael J. Formica]] 10:44, 5 November 2007 (CST) | ||
Go for it!--[[User:Gary Giamboi|Gary Giamboi]] 12:44, 5 November 2007 (CST) |
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Article status | Developing article: beyond a stub, but incomplete |
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Basic cleanup done? | Yes |
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Please continue, Dawei. Excellent start. (applause from the grateful audience) Nancy Nancy Sculerati MD 08:51, 8 February 2007 (CST)
I do not know enough to know if you already have included this in one of the already written subheadings, but could you kindly add "Yoga as a healing art" to the article? This article will open up into several others, and at least one should go in that direction. Thanks, Nancy Nancy Sculerati MD 20:49, 8 February 2007 (CST)
- Okay, will do. Thanks for the kind words! Bei Dawei
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Nothing much to change if I am not mistaken. Thomas Simmons 17:50, 16 March 2007 (CDT)
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Great content so far, but I'm wondering if the intro is a bit too chummy. Would anyone object to making it a bit more academic? Blessings. --Michael J. Formica 10:44, 5 November 2007 (CST)
Go for it!--Gary Giamboi 12:44, 5 November 2007 (CST)
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