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Say, this is a very strong article!  Congratulations!  I was wondering, though, whether a map or map might be a worthy addition, to help illustrate da Gama's accomplishments.  With that, it could almost be ready to be nominated for Approval -- do let me know when that time draws near, and I will be glad to assist.  [[User:Russell Potter|Russell Potter]] 20:25, 17 June 2007 (CDT)
Say, this is a very strong article!  Congratulations!  I was wondering, though, whether a map or map might be a worthy addition, to help illustrate da Gama's accomplishments.  With that, it could almost be ready to be nominated for Approval -- do let me know when that time draws near, and I will be glad to assist.  [[User:Russell Potter|Russell Potter]] 20:25, 17 June 2007 (CDT)
Hi Russell, thank you for the feedback. Yes, I think a map is necessary for Vasco da Gama's first voyage, as the text mentions the route and the reader probably doesn't know ''exactly'' where those places are. But I can't find one we can use here and I don't know how to draw maps. This can't be use [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Image:Gama_route_1.png], because the real name of the author is unknown. Something like this would be nice [http://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/Image:Caminho_maritimo_para_a_India.png], it's more complete, but the map is in Portuguese. Some details on the article need to be better worked, more information can still be added; also, I must say I'm a bit concerned about the narrative coherence of the article, as it can get difficult to describe journeys without writing thinks like "on xxx he arrived...", etc --[[User:José Leonardo Andrade|José Leonardo Andrade]] 05:41, 18 June 2007 (CDT)

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Article Checklist for "Vasco da Gama"
Workgroup category or categories Geography Workgroup, History Workgroup [Categories OK]
Article status Developed article: complete or nearly so
Underlinked article? Yes
Basic cleanup done? Yes
Checklist last edited by Petréa Mitchell 12:54, 5 May 2007 (CDT)

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Great aricle

Say, this is a very strong article! Congratulations! I was wondering, though, whether a map or map might be a worthy addition, to help illustrate da Gama's accomplishments. With that, it could almost be ready to be nominated for Approval -- do let me know when that time draws near, and I will be glad to assist. Russell Potter 20:25, 17 June 2007 (CDT)

Hi Russell, thank you for the feedback. Yes, I think a map is necessary for Vasco da Gama's first voyage, as the text mentions the route and the reader probably doesn't know exactly where those places are. But I can't find one we can use here and I don't know how to draw maps. This can't be use [1], because the real name of the author is unknown. Something like this would be nice [2], it's more complete, but the map is in Portuguese. Some details on the article need to be better worked, more information can still be added; also, I must say I'm a bit concerned about the narrative coherence of the article, as it can get difficult to describe journeys without writing thinks like "on xxx he arrived...", etc --José Leonardo Andrade 05:41, 18 June 2007 (CDT)