Talk:Count Rumford
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It is incredible how user-unfriendly CZ is. I used to put the checklist template here, but I cannot find it anymore. On top of this page I'm told to put the subpages template here and to read a number of help pages that link to yet more help pages. All I want to say is that this is the start of a physics/history article. I don't want to read 20 pages of TFM and jot down all I'm expected to do or not to do. Now that I'm on steam: I don't want to read all those pages about writing biographies either. I am here to write not to read laws, bylaws, regulations and other para-legal stuff. --Paul Wormer 16:51, 12 March 2008 (CDT)
- Couldn't agree more - I often wonder if that is a deterrent to new authors.
- I've tweaked the lede a bit - trying to state what he is most known for in the opening sentence and moving the birth/death date material down into the meat of the article. Since you're more familiar with this topic, you might be able to phrase it better than I have. --Todd Coles 19:46, 14 March 2008 (CDT)
- Todd, you removed from the lead-in the fact that Rumford was born in Mass., i.e., that he was American. Further his lifespan is gone from the lead-in. Don't you think that these hard facts belong there? --Paul Wormer 14:23, 15 March 2008 (CDT)
- Paul, I'm sorry I meant to keep his lifespan in there. I think the way it is set up now looks good - lets you know when he lived but doesn't dominate the first sentence. One question I meant to ask - is he most commonly known as Count Rumford, or as Benjamin Thompson? By the way, I nominated this for CZ:New Draft of the Week. --Todd Coles 20:34, 15 March 2008 (CDT)
- I'm not sure what you mean, Paul. I just clicked on 'start article', which I assume it what a rank beginner would do; there's a link to 'how to start an article', and to me that looks pretty simple for a beginner.
- Yes, if you're a CZ user already and you've only ever used the pre-subpage startup, I'll grant you doing the whole metadata thing takes a bit of getting used to.
- Aleta Curry 01:33, 16 March 2008 (CDT)
- Todd, the name Rumford is *much* better known than Thompson. His inventions (Rumford lamp, Rumford fireplace, etc.) all carry the name Rumford. Also as scientist he is known as Rumford. Therefore, and without first consulting long tedious instructions, I chose "Count Rumford" as article name with "Benjamin Thompson" as redirect.
- Aleta, after finishing an article I used to copy and paste output of the checklist macro into the talk page. I could find this output with a few mouse clicks. This has worked for me close to hundred times. Suddenly somebody removed the output of checklist. I therefore tried to put the subpages template in the talk page but then all sorts of green stuff appeared. I had no idea what to do with it and it told me to read a seven-step instruction manual, with each step containing substeps linking to further "simple" instructions. I suppose I could have managed (after all I have 40 years experience in computer programming in all sorts of languages), but I didn't want to waste my time.
- --Paul Wormer 11:05, 16 March 2008 (CDT)
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